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  1. Date: 7/3/2010 5:38:00 PM
    What a very true write, Lynette! and ha! gotta love that first stanza ;) but even better is how you made it sort of deep in your last stanza--you definitely have talent! --nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/15/2010 9:51:00 AM
    open his eyes to love if there is any light down there

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 7:23:00 PM
    i still enjoyed this one, strong ego...right now i am just checking what picture to create for the pub... lol. and slam for the joker.. did you read his slam to me on the disussion page. it was cute i will let you know when i post his tomorrow. maybe you can check it out. thanks for stoping by to say hi, hello right back at you, have a nice one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 9:07:00 AM
    Haaaaaaaaa! Sometimes the smell will produce a desired results.Smile. So many romances go something like this: 'Come help me love Myself, for myself is who I am in love with." Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 7:52:00 AM
    Don't u just hate guys who are always all into themselves...or that everything has to be all about them? I have one of those but he gets a little better every day...Lynette your talent shines with your range of poetry.. am so impressed every time I read a new one from u.... thankxxx for your very sweet birthday wishes and vacation fun comments...having a blast for one more week... luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 5/23/2010 6:39:00 AM
    sounds as if his ego is way over his head, way to go Lynette a fool not to slow down. Sooner or later we all fall down and overcome. enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/22/2010 7:08:00 AM
    People are often not as cool as they think they are and life under false perceptions, Lynette. Eventually, however, they reappear, often mired in confusion. Deep and powerful poem. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/22/2010 4:39:00 AM
    Very expressive and descriptive of one full of conceit(you know the illness that makes everyone sick except the one who has it)...I like it...Keep the creative pen flowing .....Thanks for so faithfully stopping by and commenting on my work...soup mail..Sara

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 8:30:00 PM
    hmmm, and what is that unconscious desire? I like this one, Lynette. Very well done! LUv, andrea