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Down

She is very down today
The pain in her eyes is very disturbing, I can’t control myself
She is very young to experience this kind of pain
My only way to help her now is to pick her up 
She has lost her soul. Her pride has been taken away from her
She was just a young innocent child with love and much of it to share

How can the world be so cruel to her?
How the worlds can let this happen
How can woman still have a child and hold it on their arms
Forget all the troubles in the world and forget about this girl
Her life will be nothing but darkness
The evil that has been brought to this world is unforgivable.

The world has became a beast that eats us all away
Takes our virgin souls and eats us alive
She was a young virgin; raped by men she called uncle
The world has became selfish, disarming, rude and foolish
Words are hopeless to this world
An answer will be answered soon
A glorious Monday morning will be glorified.

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  1. Date: 5/21/2010 7:47:00 PM
    strong write