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Explore*** Trois Par Huit***

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Explore*** Trois Par Huit***

Trois Par Huit
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3,6,9,12,12,9,6,3

                                                        Prince of bliss
                                                 has risen with the kiss,
                                       you have planted on my collarbone.

                         Thoughts of things to come whip around like a cyclone
                             in my mind. No longer alone, our love has grown..

                                     Lets not postpone, I yearn to be yours,
                                            yearn to bathe on your shores,
                                                           to explore!!!


Jared Pickett
5/21/2010
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  1. Date: 6/3/2010 11:01:00 AM
    Hats off to the Prince of Bliss, JARED! Another good exploration into poetry with love words. Keep up the good writing. Smiles, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 6/2/2010 10:42:00 AM
    New Friend as well. Greetings Jared. Thankyou for the kind reply. I enjoyed trying to enter your contest. That was my first poem of that type. I thank you for having the contest which encouraged me to try. It is an honour to have been considered for second. I have read your this piece. Very Nice. I shall look at your other work. Have a Great Day ! Ciao for now. P.S. - here's to more poem fun in the future. Amen.

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 11:45:00 AM
    enjoyed! I will have to check this contest out, and hope to have a fun challenge.

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 1:50:00 PM
    Hats off to anyone who can use collarbone as a rhyme :) Great example of a trois par huit. Nice internal rhyme too.

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 4:46:00 PM
    Well this is cool .. and as a rule ... I always hear from u ... these past few days ... on beach in haze... wondering what u up to?...with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 5/23/2010 4:26:00 PM
    GREAT example for your contest, Jared! I enjoyed this one. Andrea

  1. Date: 5/22/2010 1:35:00 PM
    I have entered your contest Mr. Pickett and hope you like my entry and the centering was tough on this site. Satin Doll Diva

  1. Date: 5/22/2010 8:28:00 AM
    Hi Jared :) This is really a great example--I'm excited to try out this new form of poetry, so thanks for introducing us to these forms--will be sending you soup mail! :)

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 9:15:00 PM
    What a wonderful poem and example. Love that "Prince of Bliss" and exploring. You'll always be my favorite poet Mr. JP. Nice and romantic. Going to my favorites. Scarlett

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 11:10:00 AM
    Very sweet and beautiful and that cyclone whirlwinding. .let us wonder,great write Jared. .Charma.