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Crystal Dove

I rode upon a crystal dove
Straight into the arms of love
Offered up my heart and soul
Every man should have a goal

I have found honor in my life
I respect and adore my wife
For her these words are true
I am the thing’s I say and do

To open the lock turn the key
Take a look up inside of me
For I have nothing left to hide
Love has helped me find pride

As for my life these words are true
I’m proud my heart belongs to you



Brian suggested I should try a
Free Form Sonnet - Written for
my wife Antoinette - Her love
transformed me into the man
I am today - I'm very proud
and very lucky to hold her heart

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  1. Date: 6/11/2012 3:56:00 AM

    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 5:26:00 PM

    So beautiful your sonnet was. What a lucky girl. Thank you for sharing.

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 5:20:00 PM

    Thank you so much for your ever kind comments. As you have noticed many of my poems, as i call them are about so many subjects. I am one of these souls who can retain information. Many of the War pieces i have written is knowledge i knew when i was 11 or 12. History is a big part of me. My ancestors go back as far as Lord Nelson. Hardy is on my mothers side. Thank you once again Michael >> James

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 5:14:00 PM

    Michael, the title followed by the poem itself is simply beautiful. Your words are just wonderful >> James

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 12:42:00 AM

    Great sonnet poetry Michael,your opening couplet encapsulates this your song of love.Rgds Brian.More power to your poetic elbow !

  1. Date: 5/22/2010 7:36:00 AM

    God has blessed you with true love and I'm so glad you appreciate it, MJ. It's a rare find and I'll bet Antoinette loves this poem too. Great write! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 9:05:00 PM

    Beautifully done, Michael and a wonderful tribute to your love !!

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 11:14:00 AM

    Wow! A breathtaking flow! Among those lines ....there's music ! Excellent work here, Michael! I'm glad you're posting. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 9:58:00 AM

    Beautiful Michael. it is so good to see your posts today. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol YF4L

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 8:09:00 AM

    Very well written my friend..I know where you are writing from.. The heart. stay true always Michael

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 8:03:00 AM

    very sweet. you and your wife are fortunate to have found each other. God bless, and thank you, chuck

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 6:12:00 AM

    A nice tribute in sonnet