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by Joseph Addison

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  1. Date: 5/25/2010 10:31:00 PM

    Very nice poem. Lots of insight. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Happy Writing!

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 11:23:00 AM

    Great sense of description and a great story!Excellent, just excellent! hugs,Emily

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 9:14:00 AM

    The first part of you story sounds like myself, only tho, each time I write a poem. Each poem I write, seems as though I've written and read it before in times past. These are Sacred Heart conformations to the mind. I've had them all my life. Thank you so much for your gracious comments, they are greatly appreciated. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 2:06:00 PM

    You really captured the stony coldness you wrote of here. I liked that element and how you made the girl so still and cold at the end. "Rid her hand of his face"GREAT image!! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 9:47:00 AM

    I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Lynette. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 4:17:00 AM

    I agree what a wonderful write!

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 12:54:00 AM

    GOOD MORNING DEAR, WHAT A POEM. GOT ALL INTO. AWAKE SO EARLY, ME 2 NOT MY NORMAL TIME 2 B AWAKE. READING THE CONTEST ENTRIES. THIS POEM OF YOURS IS A FINE WRITE LOVE THE LOST LOOK AT THE END. HAVE YOURSELF A NICE AND WONDERFUL DAY DEAR LYNETEE,,IRMA