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DARK POET -Beauty N-D Beast

DARK POET /// Beauty and the Beast

In the deep core of her skin.
I feel a human not a being! 
Cutting out her heart, ripping at the seam.
Leaving my prey gutless, in every form of sin.

Watch the last beat of her heart as I slaughter your (WIFE.)
(HUSBAND) thank you for watching, as I slowly kill and eat your prey.

Stripping her down in her every women way.
I slit her throat and watch the red pours out her neck.
Gasping as she gulps on her own blood.
Gently I reach in and remove her tongue.
A devour so deep for all the beauty she spoke gave.
I detach all her limbs before she gave God her grace.

No pity did I take  upon her while she gave up her last breath.
I could see the emotions deep in her eye's.
Staring right back at me as I  pounded out her chest.
Laughing at her brutal cries!
Confessing that I put her to rest.
Chuckle to the  thought, how our beauty never dies.
Trapped by my own dark abyss.

Her mind is no waste, with a hunger only I can taste 
Her eyes I will cut up and burn,   -for being blinded by his way-
Her red~ plum lips I have sewed shut,  - for never speaking up-
Her tongue I swallowed complete.
I could not stand the crying of the soon to be slaughtered sheep.
Bathing naked in her guts for never standing up.
Plunging out her spine, pricking my finger on her hip.
My blood gushing out thick while hers flows out thin.
Analyzing while mutilating on myself reflecting twin!

Once I begun to lurk her beauty got trapped within. 
Putting her in a coffin to do away the tears.
I'm holding up a guard with an unbreakable shell.
My prisoner in this body of lust~ making her forget natures hell.

This women to me is dead, she got murdered long ago.
The front I put upon is more delicate than I show.
How can I let her find her Beauty-----------(WIFE)
When she still lives with the beast----------(HUSBAND)


I learned her only secret! 
That will give her life and  RELIVE her weaken  knees.
Give her a rose and you will see!
My ugliness will melts away and her true beauty will show.

*Thank you beast,(Husband)~
* for reminding me what killed the beauty ,(Wife)*

~SKAT~

4 NATHAN DILTS ):-*)  a simple reminder :)contest(:

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  1. Date: 4/17/2013 10:17:00 PM

    I see you won for dis dark awesome freeverse and i attest to its poetic lurid splendour. This title anywhere attracts me coz it relates to me personally and a lot of my poems focus on d beauty n beast scenario. Take care.

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 5:29:00 AM

    Not for the feint hearted that one, very powerfully written, well deserved win.

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 5:23:00 AM

    Congrats on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest ~SKAT~. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 2:24:00 AM

    Congrats on your deserved win in P.d's contest!

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 10:37:00 PM

    I super enjoyed reading this one again, Skat-- wow what a gory but also very gripping write -- I think this was around that time that I got to reading more of you :) Super congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 6:38:00 PM

    Oo-la-la, you have my skin crawling here with this vivid write. This must have been hard work. A well-deserved placement in PD's contest with this polished write. Congratulations, SKAT (As an aside, "SKAT" means 'darling' in my mother tongue) ^__^

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 5:25:00 PM

    SKAt!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! with your poem in my old entry contest:-) Thank you very much for supporting my awesome contest. I had so much fun reading each and every entry. I'm glad you where among all my chosen winners. Keep posting your good poems,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 2:09:00 PM

    Many congrats, Skat : )

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 1:39:00 PM

    Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Skat

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 12:55:00 PM

    oh big huge congrats S.K.A.T. my BFF on this big winner in this contest today.. I remember it well from your own contest my friend.. oh please enjoy ... as u are enjoying that bundle of pink joy luv..

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 11:55:00 AM

    Very well done. congrats on your fine win . cory

  1. Date: 8/16/2010 7:50:00 PM

    I am a big fan of dark poetry, Edgar Allan Poe is my favourite ; )

  1. Date: 8/16/2010 4:02:00 PM

    I have just read this poem listening to josh groban, Per Te. A double dramatic effect! Brilliant!

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 9:54:00 PM

    Loved this dark poem!I don't think I could ever write anything this dark but this was definitely unique.Thanks for the comments.Keep writing, Jaz

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 8:36:00 PM

    This was excellent writing.I studied criminal psychology and this was a very deep profound psychological basis...very creative...

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 6:26:00 PM

    Excellent write! I am drawn to dark poetry, although I write dark every once in a while. It comes natural to some, for me it requires a bit of thinking and a few headaches. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 7:42:00 PM

    SOUP MAIL...

  1. Date: 6/15/2010 6:57:00 PM

    its okay, Irma.i didn't think that, i know almost every poet on here is always busy.so don't even worry about that. by the way, im sorry i havn't been on in a while. i have to take summer school, i'll tell you a secert, im really 16, going on to 17, in my junior yr, beginning this year.and my boyfriend is 19. so i've been kind of forcing myself to study a lot, to graduate in time.. have a great night.lol.hope your husband can chill, its not like you're looking up naked men, right.(: -always

  1. Date: 6/12/2010 7:54:00 AM

    Awesome piece of writing showing how one by one the ambitions and dreams as well as the longings and love was chocked to death. Interesting bold way to express the agonies of one's feelings. And many thank my friend for your precious comments on my Poem Patradoot. Love and best wishes always......Ravindra......s k a t.

  1. Date: 5/28/2010 6:13:00 AM

    This is interesting, very interesting. It flows very well and is mysterious. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 1:34:00 PM

    wow, you could have won your own contest with this one! I got pretty hooked with reading this! There's even a touch of Hannibal Lecter here I see, very twisted indeed! And, now I know what you meant by your comment on mine ;) I guess I shouldn't have read this before going to sleep, lol--better find a light hearted poem quick! I have to hand it to you though, you sure have a unique take on Nathan's contest, wishing you all the best :)

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 1:16:00 PM

    Luv back at ya... finished my State poem..now just have to post... it covers a lot.. hope u like ..will do in a few... luv.. from me to u..BBF Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 12:03:00 AM

    Pain,pain,dark,death,what a beast can do to a beauty,maybe his bestial ego won't even realize.that he is cutting her to pieces,that she needs to run away,yet she can't ,the twin,the reflection in the mirror,she is dead. .Dark and sad,touching in many ways,going to my fvs. .Charma.

  1. Date: 5/23/2010 8:01:00 PM

    Luv Luv Luv... want to do a poem for New Jersey for your contest Irma my BBF ...can u save that State for me please if no one has it already? let me know as I have to try to do it tomorrow...thankxxx ...luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 5/22/2010 12:25:00 PM

    thanks for your comment to me today(last night I mean). Yes, that is how the contests are. It would be rare to find a contest in which everyone followed the directions precisely but you sure got some good twisted poems! have a happy weekend. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/22/2010 4:46:00 AM

    Nice one, enjoyed reading this :)

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 4:57:00 PM

    wow, you did amazing on this Irma, to show how much your husband has killed your own beauty within because he can't see it, he doesn't appreciate it, or understand you level of beauty.ah, and the personification/groosm imagery, freaked me out a little bit, just a tad.lol.does he know you write about him all the time like this? saying he's an ugly beast? lol.you go Irma! -Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 10:50:00 AM

    hey skat. thanks for your comments about my bio/name. by the way, nice view on your blog picture. very nice.

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 10:03:00 AM

    This is a great write, Irma! Enjoyed your dark poetry today! You were not sure about a Fata Morgana it seems. A Fata Morgana has something to do with different layers of hot and cooler air and it is like a mirror reflecting someting which is miles and miles away and seem to be close. The closer you come this picture will recede. Thank you for your kind comments and have a great weekend...Gert

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 6:27:00 PM

    Oh, so THAT's dark poetry!!!! How the heck can I create THAT?!?!?!? Actually, I kinda liked it. Nice job you poetess of the dark side. Joe

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