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Ladybug

Quiet humming
Wings flying
Six legs
Landing on a leaf
Red backdrop
Black polka dots
Splattered across the top
Dainty
Crawling slowly along
Carefree
Time to enjoy nature's display
Observe the Lady

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  1. Date: 5/19/2010 7:59:00 PM

    Heck, I don't know what it is either, but I like it. Thanks for your comments on my work, I Want to be Pinocchio. I responded by posting to myself by mistake - duh! - so if you want to read what I replied, go back and read it. And thanks for reading. I've read a few others of your work. I like your raw emotion and descriptions. Good stuff. I admit to being lazy, though, and not always commenting. Sorry. Tony