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SUCCUBUS

A. W. Nutter

The sun slowly setting, time to rest
Praying constantly to find peace
For just one night I would be blest
Please God, put my mind at ease

Darkness feeds my apprehension
Wondering if the Succubus will appear
One night without her resurrection
To sleep unbridled from my fear

The curtains sway without a breeze
As a shadow approaches my bed
Petrified with a disabling disease
Her ice cold hand strokes my head

The clothing, she begins to remove 
From her paralyzed sexual slave
Laying transfixed unable to move
A corpse being raped in his grave

Infusing my mind with erotic scenes
Devouring my soul as I reach ecstasy
Lips eagerly swallowing my screams
Mentally destroyed by her intimacy


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  1. Date: 9/1/2010 9:48:00 AM
    bad to the bone....

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 10:01:00 AM
    I just wanted to speak my mind and say your writes have good visuals, really awesome.... and now back to your commenting this poem. the fourth stanza was cool the way you put a corpse being raped. What a write, very awesome write, =(^.^)=Royal

  1. Date: 5/31/2010 8:35:00 AM
    The Ist& 3rd line of your first verse makes a lovely crystalline Anthony.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 10:04:00 PM
    Quite an interesting topic you have here, Anthony --I was only vaguely aware of the incubus (hehe thanks to that band), I didn't know it had a counterpart, the succubus...found your write informative and very well written :) Thanks for your comments in my poem :)

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 3:28:00 AM
    Wonderful write on an intensly deep subject. This really gave me some thought. Keep it up! Regards, Dan C

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 3:33:00 AM
    Thank you for your comments on my work today. This piece is fiery and passionate! Bravo!

  1. Date: 5/22/2010 10:13:00 PM
    Great mind power on being able to attract readers attention. Great rhyming too. Appreciate the time for dropping by to read and post a comment to my poem: The Great Battleship. (^_^) Noel.

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 9:01:00 AM
    Great visions in your write, Anthony! Well done and thank you for your comments...Gert

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 5:23:00 AM
    WOW, very nice! I like this a lot. U got skills!

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 10:27:00 AM
    It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Anthony. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 8:55:00 AM
    Great poem, with a big connection to the darkside. So many great details here. The second to last stanza really does well to shed light on the Succubus. Chris.

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 6:51:00 AM
    I love the visuals you create Mr A! enjoyed it - regards Wilma

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 6:50:00 AM
    Great tale of seduction by the Succubus, Anthony. Provocative thoughts on the man being unable to move! Love, Carolyn