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  1. Date: 6/15/2010 9:53:00 AM
    Far out tanka. Is Dr Kavorkian nearby?

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 8:03:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Lynette! Great job you've done here...a definite winner by all standards...Sorry, I've been very busy with school and other free tonight so glad to have the opportunity to read these wonderful poems! Love you..have a good night and the rest of the weekend! Audrey

  1. Date: 5/28/2010 6:40:00 PM

  1. Date: 5/28/2010 6:30:00 PM
    I think I know what you mean in this poem. Is the Deathly needle one filled with heroin? Or is it a way something else? Thank you for your kind remarks. Eddie Birchmore was an African American poet and for quite a while ran a good reading. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 8:40:00 AM
    The message is quite clear in your Tanka, Lynette,good job. Thank you for your awesome support of my Blog. Yes, as you have experienced in reading my blog, the same anointing that gave the revelation, stays in the revelation and reveals it to the reader. That is the anointing of the Agape, Spirit.Agape is awesome. Moses

  1. Date: 5/23/2010 9:12:00 PM
    Sad story but a good write...thanks on You can..Danny

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 8:04:00 PM
    earl Cole? I wish I could remember which survivor that was. My memory is so short. Just catching up on remarks you made to my poems when I was gone. About two years ago a young gay kid won survivor. He was from my town! Oh, about my Parsley (love poem). it was not true. ARe you kidding? I would not have let such a guy as that get away. haha. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 5:32:00 PM
    Interesting thoughts that you have been for that "Runaway Train"...It is amazing at the different topics and stlyes that have been written about the topic...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 4:49:00 PM
    Hey this also works for Dark poet!!! Do ya think? Well, here I go, trying to get to five days worth of comments. I don't think I can finish tonight! But I'm giving it my best shot. So nice to see you again, Lynette and this nice little poem. It looks like you were in the winner's circle? That is GREAT! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 4:11:00 PM
    Much for the reader to ponder about in this poem. I found myself rereading this poem a few times. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 4:01:00 PM
    Awesome, Lynette! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 12:55:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Irma's "Runaway Train"contest Lynette. Good Luck in her next contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 5:55:00 AM
    Great one here- Congrats Lynette- I love the Tanka

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 3:33:00 AM
    Another different slant on this contest, and what a slant. Kool dark induced piece Lynette. Many congrats on your win in Irma's fine conest >> James

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 3:32:00 AM
    awesome Tanka, well done with jade the girl, gave her a run, you did excellent on this contest write,,congrats congrats,..p.d

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 7:45:00 PM
    Congrats Lynette on your winning poem in the Runaway Train contest... great creative write so a victory lap for u to the winners circle.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 3:01:00 PM
    jade is a character i made up a while ago, just in case you didn't know!((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((: be back laterrr to read read read & read!!!!!(: -Always

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 7:14:00 AM
    WOW It was a pleasure to read your outstanding poetry this morning Lynette. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Yhe best to you inthe contest. I thank you for your kind comments. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 6:21:00 PM
    Short but very effective. Good luck