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My Baby

Pain departed a sacred portion of human flash.
A devout detortion and flamboyant living dash.
Flagrant flaunt impregnate impish liege slash.
Slanderous sleave and pitiable pithecanthrope,
Pishogue sagacious mistranslated pish a girl rash.  

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  1. Date: 5/23/2010 10:38:00 AM

    Your most excellent verse is of rhyme form..lusciuos big long words! Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 2:58:00 PM

    Very nice poem....thank you for your nice comments....Marty

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 6:47:00 AM

    Good rhyming, nice images, alliteration make it fine piece to enjoy

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 4:15:00 AM

    It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Daljit. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 12:45:00 PM

    Wonderful use of alliteration in this beautiful poem, Daljit!! Ruben.