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In The Making

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In The Making

Why would I say wow to a woman?
If she had no bulging boobs to show
No figure I could look to with lust
Legs that couldn't add fire to the curves;

Could I muster courage to tell lies?
When the erotica well defined
Is the apple to bite full of vibes
In the deep hunger she subscribes; 

Dick has brains is a novel theory?
Touched by blindness seeks stubborn glory
Liquid moves instant potpourri
Women in love, another story:

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  1. Date: 5/17/2010 3:22:00 PM
    Well, you are being an honest man here for sure. Chris.

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 11:09:00 AM
    I love the honesty in this poem. This sounds like something The Sonnet Man would say. I will continue to watch you.

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 3:41:00 AM
    Good morning, enjoyed the short story, with a bit of lust, have yourself a good one,..p.d.