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....backlit dawn lovers

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....backlit dawn lovers

backlit dawn lovers
gray shades the cut cameo...
bookmarks of passion

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  1. Date: 5/21/2010 3:05:00 PM

    Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 12:58:00 AM

    Powerful images of passion in this one, Deb. XOXOX Lovingly, Dane

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 5:29:00 PM

    That last line is very inventive, Deb!!

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 8:16:00 AM

    WOW ... wonderful Senryu here!! You've got mail ...

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 6:52:00 PM

    great write on the photo

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 10:52:00 PM

    I love these bookmarks of passion Deb....Awesome work dear friend of mine..Charma

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 5:24:00 PM

    Nice write, much enjoyed!;)

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 10:22:00 AM

    It's a senryu! : ) (no season ref. ) ...A wonderful senryu!! And it's also a winner, Deborah! Lovely piece. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 9:21:00 AM

    Thank you for asking me Deb :) will write soon ... wow what a inteligently make the reader to Think last line is the stamp yet midlle line is my fav .... hope you well Deb :)

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 6:20:00 AM

    I think you have written this spot on to the photo in your Senryu Deb. I am not sure anymore but just me I think it is pure Senryu. Any which way it is a prize worthy write. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 4:25:00 AM

    lets hope it's actually a snryu? ... indicates the cut? and I believe it should be in both haiku and senryu but am not sure?

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 4:25:00 AM

    good morning D.G., just here stopping by to read and say hi,..p..d.

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 9:58:00 PM

    The imagery is superb....and almost more so, is the interpreatation of the photo. Best wishes towards the contest. Chris.

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 8:52:00 PM

    Nicely done Deb...the cut cameo reference is super. BG

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 7:39:00 PM

    Strong and powerful Senryu . What wonderful images... bookmarks of passion. Nice interpretation ''backlit dawn lovers" Seems to be a winner

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 3:52:00 PM

    Awesome and vividly painted. Well done. Love Heidie

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 6:41:00 AM

    me like me like like 1st line and imagery is none but perfection gl in contest I too offered my services for this one lol love yours keep that pen aflowing