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Natural Forces

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                        nature 
intervenes
                                  
atmospheric arrow parts -
                                                
spring kiss prevented
 



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  1. Date: 6/19/2010 7:09:00 PM
    Reminds me of the power of a missed kiss...that I really wanted.

  1. Date: 6/19/2010 5:23:00 PM
    Abe, thank you for choosing my poem as one of the winners in your contest....I forgot about this one! You must be really busy or something? Good to see you drop in again. Chris.

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 9:59:00 AM
    well done, strong choice of words to describe a passing by,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 9:01:00 PM
    That must be why weve had so much rain this spring. Nice one Abe. BG

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 3:36:00 AM
    Nice images aptly interpreted. A real haiku

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 11:17:00 PM
    Very nice written, Abe! I like the third line. Ruben. PS: I'm having a great time. How are you, my friend?

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 10:41:00 PM
    Ow my I can feel that atmospheric arrow..great great Haiku with a prevented Kiss,Charma.