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  1. Date: 8/4/2010 10:47:00 PM
    I kinda figured it was you because you mentioned her to me once,,,LOL,,, amd now i am curios in what form is she in you,,p..d

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 4:05:00 AM
    Absolutely stunning write Lynette. I wish to thank you for your always kind comments. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 8:06:00 PM
    I love how you turned this one around. That last line is wonderful, Lynette. Sworn sisters, what a wonderful thing. LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 5:11:00 PM
    I'LL LEAVE IT TO YOU TO WRITE, SUCH A WONDERFUL WRITE, YOUR TRUELY GIFTED... AND IF YOU HAVE A CHANCE CHECK OUT MY BLOG, I PLAN TO BE MAKING A CONTEST, I'M THINKING IT UP BUT IT'S FOR SURE , HOPEFULLY YOU PARTICIPATE, LOVE S.K.A.T. (AKA IRMA)

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 4:48:00 PM
    still brilliant awesome to the finest, here to say hi, and thanks for any and all comments, to me, always p.d.,,,,,,,s.m.

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 10:28:00 PM
    Smile, yes, what a wonderful narrative; filled with the depths of profound; and extremely well penned and told! ~ Hello dear lady, I am very glad that I came to visit you! I saw your comment upon Carolyns post, and thought, let's go see what she's all about; smile, well at least, have a glimpse....And yes, 'I see much talent in "You!" ~ Very stirring and moving and lovely and, "Excellent!" ~ "Much Warmth To You & Yours Always," John!"---Bye:)

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 7:44:00 PM
    well done!! hope you are well, keep sharing your great writes with us!!

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 5:11:00 PM
    well done Lynette, how did you pull off such a touchy story. I got to give it to. you are indeed the best young poet I know, along with Rain. wow! I got to say that twice, wow! this is deff. going to my favs. Impressive. and amazing how one can connect with the other,always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 4:09:00 PM
    Great compelling narrative that drew me in and held my attention..Wondering is it truth, based on some truth, or totally fictional?..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 3:43:00 PM
    TOUCHING. THIS DOESNT HAPPEN OFTEN. USULLY THE TWO WULD BE RASH N GO AT IT.ESPECIALLY THE GIRL WHO THIS GUY REALLY BELONGS TO. DID THE OTHER GRL HAVE ANOTHER LOVER TOO? CUZ I REMEMBER READIN UR OTHER *ENIGMA THE MOMENT*?? BUT THIS IS DIFFERNT

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 2:30:00 PM
    What a compelling narrative, Lynette! I believed every word of it, like I was watching a very good movie. When two are vying for the attention of one lover, there is always someone who gets hurt. How compassionate of the one who won his heart to reach out to the young woman in pain. Excellent writing and a gripping story that satisfies the reader's desire for a positive ending. The world may not be perfect, but the bond between "sworn sisters" is amazing. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 2:18:00 PM
    Lynette ..how does someone so young write something so intense and so immense as this? an awesome and amazing story in Narrative form and u should submit this for Carol Brown's contest about In My Perfect World.. this is sensational sweetie.. so apropos to a perfect world scenario..and narrative is one of the form required... truly inspirational sweet thing... a very creative write indeed.. luv.. always.. Linda-Marie.. if u can read my new blog posted last night.. thankxxx..

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 1:13:00 PM
    A beautiful narrative, Lynette...sad but so real..I've always believed that each one of us has a very clear cut duty to perform while we're here..not just to be there to help each other but more importantly we're here to save someone by the extraordinary things we choose to do..it may be a simple act...Thanks for sharing this as it serves as a reminder...Love, Audrey