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Goodbye Jordan

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Goodbye Jordan

Im sad because i never knew you , im sad because i did.
what would be if you where here? would you hold my hand?

You are wise
you are...
Beautiful
deep
thought-full
your everything i could want but just out of reach.



Gone with out warning. left with a hole you put in me.
- maybe i was just meant to be alone

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  1. Date: 5/13/2010 8:44:00 PM

    well done Jessica, enjoyed, except the part where you are left alone keep up the good write. thanks for your comment,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 5:55:00 PM

    enjoyed , and those last last two lines i like lol