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Just a girl

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Just a girl

Who am I ? 
               ill tell you this im just a girl with in a girl, hidden behide layers of my self. I am 
selfish and cruel , beautiful and charming. i'm the girl next door with hidden lies. I'm a sister 
and a pretend mother..
                i'm just your average teenage girl, but i have pores and deep lines etched with in 
my soul. Of course im not perfect but i never said i was.
                                        i'm just a girl.

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  1. Date: 5/13/2010 2:02:00 PM
    I really like your poem It's really good

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 3:15:00 AM
    Hello just a girl, here i am to comment again and say Thanks for your wonderful words. This is a real honest cool write about yourself. At times I call myself a poet whit in another Poet. Cool the way you expressed- girl with in another girl,- enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 8:34:00 PM
    Just a girl that has a way with words. Most beautiful, intelligent, successful women started out being "just a girl". Nicely written. I enjoyed your poem.

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 6:50:00 PM
    true, no one is , enjoyed the write

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 6:46:00 PM
    Excellent thoughts here my friend....:JP}