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  1. Date: 5/9/2010 11:07:00 PM

    It's good to see your spirits have lifted, Sami. I love the upbeat quality that fills this poem, especially the line about being caught red handed in the pursuit of happiness. So nice to have you back! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/9/2010 5:49:00 PM

    ahhhhh memory! Light & Love Please read and critique When Madness Rides on Moonlight

  1. Date: 5/9/2010 5:29:00 PM

    Nicely expressed emotions

  1. Date: 5/9/2010 3:20:00 PM

    I read your blog and came to see what you brough to us after your mini-vacation! This is sublime, Sami! The last stanza is fantastic. Great job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/9/2010 3:15:00 PM

    This is a fresh poem for sure. Love the way it breaks and flows through the rhymes and images. I get a sense of living in memories, but getting ready for upcoming changes. Well written. Chris.