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. . The Young Woman Poses so Pretty, Young Moses Arouses so Giddy. . ----<@
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binibining P.iNk
Date: 7/3/2010 5:06:00 PM
I saw this rose from your list of writes--- very witty I must say, Lynette-- short but holds so much ;)---you sure need to write some more!!! yay that you get to spend more time here--thanks for all your comments --I am a people watcher too! I enjoy making up their stories in my mind haha ;) -- and hmm I guess that's the funny thing about being online --there's always this air of mystery ;) but I can relate, just having a few friends is fine with me ;) --- happy 4th of July btw--nikko :)
b boy
Date: 6/15/2010 8:27:00 PM
lovely, B.boy
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/30/2010 5:40:00 AM
Good morning Lynette, thanks for always stoping to say hi. Ha I read Chris- new post on me he is a funny guy. I can not believe he is way to cool. People like him make it fun on the soup. As for you I never forget who my friends are, that is why i will always stop by and say hi. Have anice and wonderful Sunday,..pd..
James Fraser
Date: 5/20/2010 4:57:00 AM
Super Couplet Lynette, short but wonderfully written >> James
john freeman
Date: 5/16/2010 12:57:00 PM
Couldn't be talking about this Moses, for he is not so young. Nice Couplet, Lynette. Smile! Agape, Moses
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/11/2010 7:11:00 AM
I don't have much imagination where pictures are concerned, so it just looked to me like symbols, but I can see the rose now! Very clearly!! Have a nice day, Lynette! LUv, andrea
bUfFy fOoKsSs
Date: 5/10/2010 10:11:00 PM
THANX LYNETTE FOR THE MOTHERS DAY COMMENT. YOUR A NICE LADY.HA HAAA.LOLZ.DIS POEM IS BOMB GRL!! bUfFy
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/10/2010 1:58:00 PM
thanks for reading my poetry today. sweet LYnette!
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 5/10/2010 8:44:00 AM
So cute Lynette and luv your little designs too. appreciate all your sweet comments on my poetry and YES I had a wonderful M.D. with my sons and three little baby grandkids.. family is so fun.. hope u had a great day too...luv.. Linda-Marie..
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 5/9/2010 11:12:00 PM
Thanks for your kind note, Lynette. I get a lot of pleasure reading your work and Moses' poems. So glad you are going to keep the spiritual quality in your work! Love, Carolyn
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/9/2010 1:36:00 PM
Hey, Lynette this is cute, but what is up with the symbols? Hmmm, P.D says it's a rose. I guess I am not very visual. hahaha. Thanks for your welcome comment today, as always. LUv,Andrea
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 5/9/2010 5:11:00 AM
Moses has a sweet manner about him. He not only picks up our spirits and brings us closer to truth and wisdom, but he can also bring us great joy through his sense of humor. Fine tribute from one of my favorite writers to another, Lynnette. Love, Carolyn
Terry Russell
Date: 5/9/2010 4:28:00 AM
Nice sense of humor. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Do not be disappointed if my work isn't posted frequently. Writing Genre Fiction, or Short Story is really my hobby. I write poetry occasionally from a daily journal I keep, but I don't post very much. Anyway thanks for the compliments.
Doris Culverhouse
Date: 5/8/2010 5:50:00 PM
very nice
Annalise Brigham
Date: 5/8/2010 1:37:00 PM
Hahaha! I enjoyed this, Lynette!! Love your humor....Thanks for comments on my poems...Have a good weekend! Love, Audrey
Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/8/2010 1:33:00 PM
Very sensual short couplet...Plus design...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/8/2010 12:16:00 PM
I see a rose, this is a very nice sweet couplet . I hope he is ready for a big person who is full of beauty, i am so out of work. Now I got time to see what the 3rd line is about. i am sure we can help out each other to your thought, always a friend,..p.d.
Chris D. Aechtner
Date: 5/8/2010 11:16:00 AM
Heh heh, I suppose that symbol could be interpreted many different ways! o.O Glad to see that Moses was just human after all haha! Chris.
SKAT Aces-
Date: 5/8/2010 11:12:00 AM
A GOOD ONE LYNETTE, I LIKE THIS COUPLET, WHAT IS THAT SYMBOL, IT'S MAKING ME WANNA KNOW LOL, IS IT A STAFF??