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  1. Date: 7/3/2010 5:06:00 PM

    I saw this rose from your list of writes--- very witty I must say, Lynette-- short but holds so much ;)---you sure need to write some more!!! yay that you get to spend more time here--thanks for all your comments --I am a people watcher too! I enjoy making up their stories in my mind haha ;) -- and hmm I guess that's the funny thing about being online --there's always this air of mystery ;) but I can relate, just having a few friends is fine with me ;) --- happy 4th of July btw--nikko :)

  1. Date: 6/15/2010 8:27:00 PM

    lovely, B.boy

  1. Date: 5/30/2010 5:40:00 AM

    Good morning Lynette, thanks for always stoping to say hi. Ha I read Chris- new post on me he is a funny guy. I can not believe he is way to cool. People like him make it fun on the soup. As for you I never forget who my friends are, that is why i will always stop by and say hi. Have anice and wonderful Sunday,..pd..

  1. Date: 5/20/2010 4:57:00 AM

    Super Couplet Lynette, short but wonderfully written >> James

  1. Date: 5/16/2010 12:57:00 PM

    Couldn't be talking about this Moses, for he is not so young. Nice Couplet, Lynette. Smile! Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/11/2010 7:11:00 AM

    I don't have much imagination where pictures are concerned, so it just looked to me like symbols, but I can see the rose now! Very clearly!! Have a nice day, Lynette! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 5/10/2010 10:11:00 PM

    THANX LYNETTE FOR THE MOTHERS DAY COMMENT. YOUR A NICE LADY.HA HAAA.LOLZ.DIS POEM IS BOMB GRL!! bUfFy

  1. Date: 5/10/2010 1:58:00 PM

    thanks for reading my poetry today. sweet LYnette!

  1. Date: 5/10/2010 8:44:00 AM

    So cute Lynette and luv your little designs too. appreciate all your sweet comments on my poetry and YES I had a wonderful M.D. with my sons and three little baby grandkids.. family is so fun.. hope u had a great day too...luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 5/9/2010 11:12:00 PM

    Thanks for your kind note, Lynette. I get a lot of pleasure reading your work and Moses' poems. So glad you are going to keep the spiritual quality in your work! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/9/2010 1:36:00 PM

    Hey, Lynette this is cute, but what is up with the symbols? Hmmm, P.D says it's a rose. I guess I am not very visual. hahaha. Thanks for your welcome comment today, as always. LUv,Andrea

  1. Date: 5/9/2010 5:11:00 AM

    Moses has a sweet manner about him. He not only picks up our spirits and brings us closer to truth and wisdom, but he can also bring us great joy through his sense of humor. Fine tribute from one of my favorite writers to another, Lynnette. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/9/2010 4:28:00 AM

    Nice sense of humor. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Do not be disappointed if my work isn't posted frequently. Writing Genre Fiction, or Short Story is really my hobby. I write poetry occasionally from a daily journal I keep, but I don't post very much. Anyway thanks for the compliments.

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 5:50:00 PM

    very nice

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 1:37:00 PM

    Hahaha! I enjoyed this, Lynette!! Love your humor....Thanks for comments on my poems...Have a good weekend! Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 1:33:00 PM

    Very sensual short couplet...Plus design...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 12:16:00 PM

    I see a rose, this is a very nice sweet couplet . I hope he is ready for a big person who is full of beauty, i am so out of work. Now I got time to see what the 3rd line is about. i am sure we can help out each other to your thought, always a friend,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 11:16:00 AM

    Heh heh, I suppose that symbol could be interpreted many different ways! o.O Glad to see that Moses was just human after all haha! Chris.

  1. Date: 5/8/2010 11:12:00 AM

    A GOOD ONE LYNETTE, I LIKE THIS COUPLET, WHAT IS THAT SYMBOL, IT'S MAKING ME WANNA KNOW LOL, IS IT A STAFF??