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tall men overshadow small men who overshadow smaller men who are overshadowed by tall men

tall men overshadow the small men
in great sadness we all fall down
joy abounds from the inside of hearts and souls
tears fall like stars
onto the cracked pavements of old




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  1. Date: 6/14/2010 6:06:00 AM

    excellent work the title is distracting..perhaps Cracked....or Overshadowed?

  1. Date: 5/5/2010 8:44:00 PM

    wow, good write, enjoyed