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Join Me In The Rain

Join me in the rain
     For I'd gone insane,
Cutting through my veins,
     Washing away the pain,
Everybody's slain,
     Their teardrops drained,
But only the blood remains.

P.S. Still need a little bit to work on.

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  1. Date: 5/31/2010 7:10:00 AM

    When I was younger I would love to play and dance in the rain. That was so much fun. This poem flows very well. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 5/6/2010 3:54:00 AM

    well done on what you have so far, have a nice one,..p..d

  1. Date: 5/5/2010 6:51:00 PM

    very wonderful expressions