Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Tunnels Of Ambiguity (A.hail.Of.bullets.Is.All.i.feel Remix)

Daniel Corcoran Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Tunnels Of Ambiguity (A.hail.Of.bullets.Is.All.i.feel Remix) which was written by poet Daniel Corcoran. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Daniel Corcoran

Best Daniel Corcoran Poems

+ Fav Poet

Tunnels Of Ambiguity (A.hail.Of.bullets.Is.All.i.feel Remix)

On trains
             on trains
                        trains that travel through tunnels of ambiguity in delusion
The rectangular motion of the subtle wheels meld into the subconscious 
A failed and flawed and fragrant commuter routine of blood sweat and ignorance.
And ignorance of blood and sweat and tears 
                                                  and tears of blood sweat in ignorance


Outside fragmented windows stand the borders of disease that border humanity as a whole
Humanity is a disease some would say
                                some would say it isn't.
A chaotic jumble of envy and spiritless ineptitude is all that I can view in the darkness 

We all roll into the station whilst time grinds still but in the precious seconds we can't
keep still.

Forged and tattered tickets to oblivion checked by the conductor of greed.
We all conduct greed at some point in our life
We just need a nudge and a wink to get back on track.

The end of the line stretches into infinite divergences.
And on another platform somewhere stands a man who looks just like me
And who smiles just like me
And who cries just like me
But maybe he will not die quite like me
And maybe if we met he would not like what he sees in me.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 5/3/2010 5:05:00 PM
    Very impressive poem. I liked it

  1. Date: 5/3/2010 4:53:00 PM
    Very intriguing poem filled with existentialist insecurity....is that the right word? A.hail.Of.bullets.Is.All.i.feel. Look at the bright side--at least you are feeling a lot no? A lot of people don't feel much at all anymore, and even if you are feeling a hail of bullets, you are at least feeling a lot. Chris.