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Juan Paolo Galua
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faint star
amidst the murky sky that envelopes the city a faint star I see!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/17/2010 8:50:00 PM
WEll, awesome, I found a tiny gem before I say goodnight, sweet poet! Luv, Andrea
Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/23/2010 6:22:00 AM
Excellent descriptive Haiku that you have penned in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and reading and commenting on my work for I appreciate you taking the time to do that..Sara
Gregory Golden
Date: 6/20/2010 9:17:00 AM
Absolutely, a gorgeous poetry writing! Hard to quantify if with a plus 10, off the charts. This poem is full of imagery, color and tone. Indeed, this poem sings with resonance. Each word a morsel of bread, expressing true color, fresh voice and deep passion. We trust the stars will shine. Well done!
Sharon Tideswell
Date: 6/19/2010 6:31:00 AM
Lovely haiku Juan, how satisfying to find that star amidst those murky skies. Super imagery ~ Sharon :)
James Fraser
Date: 6/19/2010 6:06:00 AM
Wonderful capture of the murky sky Juan, kool piece. Thank you for the lovely comment on "I Remember the Day" I feel the comments on poetry not only uplift the writers, they feel recognised and welcomed. They also boost our wants to write as comments do give inspiration to others. But more importantly it gives a massive rush to the youngsters on the site, as they are our poets of tomorrow. So many people on this site forget this > have a great weekend >> James
Date: 5/1/2010 9:27:00 AM
Nice use of imagery. Gives one the sense of hope at the end which I like. Much conveyed in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/1/2010 5:38:00 AM
a real beauty the view you see, i also want to thank you taking your time to red my poetry,..p.d.
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 5/1/2010 5:25:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets Juan and appreciate your comments on my poetry reads.. your Haiku is quite enjoyable and stars are a favorite of mine..thankxxx with luv...from the "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
