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Her Reluctant Farewell

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Her Reluctant Farewell

I take one last look at your disappointed face
As one glistening tear slides down your cheek
But I no longer wish to stay in this place
A life of adventure I wish to seek

The romance we kindled must come to a close
Our relationship ends now that I’m to depart
I do wish that this breakup were not so morose
Only I have committed that my life shall restart

As you look at me from the balcony above
And I at you from the street below
I bless you with my everlasting love
Adieu, my dear for now I must go.
 

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  1. Date: 5/3/2010 11:26:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Iolanda's "Untold Secrets" contest Savannah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/2/2010 5:50:00 PM

    A strong woman you made her. SAssy! LUv, Andrea and Congratulations!

  1. Date: 5/2/2010 11:47:00 AM

    very nicely done congrats on your win faleshia

  1. Date: 5/2/2010 9:48:00 AM

    Congratulations Savannah on your 2nd place winning poem!! Great work!! :) Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 5/1/2010 7:15:00 PM

    Wow, this is super..congrats on your win. BG

  1. Date: 5/1/2010 6:27:00 PM

    Congrats on your win with this one. Nicely done.

  1. Date: 5/1/2010 5:26:00 PM

    Congratulations Savannah on your second place in this fun contest. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/1/2010 4:56:00 PM

    Congrats Savannah on your 2nd place win in Iolanda's contest.. with this beautiful Quatrain filled with emotion and regret... enjoy your special victory...luv... from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 6:56:00 PM

    Very nice expressions. I enjoyed it

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 2:14:00 PM

    nice telling him,..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 1:27:00 PM

    Nicely done! The one thing that is so frustrating about these contests? Posting an entry and then reading so many that are much better than mine. Then again, that's what I love about these contests, too. This one is very good, in my humble opinion.

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 12:38:00 PM

    Great Quatrain that should do well in the contest...So many thoughts on this one picture..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara