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Sexxy Back

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Sexxy Back

Tight,
your sexxy back,
slim, 
hypnotized by such delicate decor. 
Your rippled core,
a six pack of lust.
I'm high on you, 
like I'm trippin' on angel dust.
your sexxy back so visually robust
I must adjust myself before I bust.


Jared Pickett
04/27/2010
Asavvy1

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  1. Date: 2/2/2012 6:18:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing yours poem. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/7/2010 8:33:00 PM
    Mr. Pickett, I have read your poems and find them very stimulating. You have a very rare tallent. I love reading your works. Scarlett

  1. Date: 5/4/2010 6:38:00 PM
    SOUP MAIL...

  1. Date: 5/3/2010 6:29:00 AM
    Funny comments from Deborah, enjoyed the poem too. On the Sestina--you mention sticking to the meter, but I don't see a specific requirement on meter listed. does it have to have a certain number of syllables?

  1. Date: 4/30/2010 4:18:00 PM
    Very good/ I would never down grade your work like you had mine/ Thanks, Mario

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 3:42:00 PM
    OK now u have me hooked on the Sestina form so I wrote another entitled A Dance to Romance (A Romeo Meets His Juliet) .. a critique' would be welcome ... oh ASavvy 1.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 10:14:00 AM
    LOL / Full hard and so rotund, your abdomen protrudes, the bulk of you so large ...your gift it does preclude, I'd be high on you oh yes, high so high on that barrel of a chest, I see you laugh like Santa Claus, though why none can guess, perhaps you do look better when it's dark and I'm undressed! :P

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 6:17:00 AM
    I need a shower lol well written my friend

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 10:50:00 PM
    Sexy poem, Jared!! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 9:05:00 PM
    Very passionate and sensual...enjoyed...Thanks for the honor of winning in your contest...Marty

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 8:39:00 PM
    I aim to please ASavvy 1 and so far all my numbers are in the WIN column.. no losses.. thankxxx for the encouragement.... luv your unique creative write Mr. J... Sexxy Back is a favorite song of mine... hhmmmmmm .. guess great minds DO think alike... later luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 6:40:00 PM
    Passionate and very sensual,lovely to read indeed-Charma.

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 4:55:00 PM
    Passionate..Thanks for the placement in your contest..Sara