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A Vain Season Is Coming

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A Vain Season Is Coming

The day we found out
Our lives were like a 
moving novel
Constantly weaving in and 
out the threads of our years.
Sometimes when the night closes its
windows, I stumble across you
when you are full of laughter and 
revenge, oh my God you say
Because nothing that resembles 
our lords creatures is afraid of you.
I pray the rosarys like you scim through
scriptures, looking for that other sign
Beside the ones I've found already.
Could it be? 
We search to much.

Copyright 2010 by derrick burton
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  1. Date: 5/5/2010 5:14:00 AM
    Yes, I do believe sometimes we "search too much," becoming so introspective we cannot find the joy in life. Well done, Derrick! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 5:25:00 PM
    The song that you commented on,Temporary Home was done by Carrie Underwood.I only wish I could write something like this.Thank you for stopping by.Have a great day.

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 9:59:00 AM
    very nice write enjoyed so true faleshia

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 5:44:00 AM
    Very thought provoking, Derrick. And, yes, I do believe we spend too much time searching. Sometimes when we think we'll find answers, we find only more questions. Excellent poem!

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 1:04:00 AM
    Thank you Derrick ,it is a fascinating portrait.Rgds Brian I posted examples of my art with my poetry on bogspot.com (see my bio page) I also include a retrospective of my art on blogspotcom at http://poema-ichthys.blogspot.com.

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 2:17:00 PM
    Interesting thoughts that you have penned...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara