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TIME TO EAT

Getting nutrition
On a mission to survive
feed your little soul

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  1. Date: 4/29/2010 7:50:00 PM

    Sweet and cool, thank you for my comment. (B..boy)

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 4:46:00 PM

    I love this Haiku. You're very talented, Faleshia. Great piece. Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 10:13:00 AM

    Enjoyed is this for the hummmingbird picture?

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 8:53:00 AM

    I see a very deep meaning here. thanks faleshia!

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 7:48:00 AM

    Love the last line Faleshia! Wonderful haiku you have penned here! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Have a gloriously blessed day~Mary~

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 10:27:00 PM

    many of us eat a little too much though i must admit lol

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 9:20:00 PM

    I love that little soul line!!! good luck Faleshia!!

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 2:13:00 PM

    One of my favorite soul stuffs, eating. Good write, Faleshia. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 12:36:00 PM

    What a great Haiku for the contest.. such imaginative words to fit the photo..good luck Faleshia and thankxxx for reading my poetry today..luv.. Linda-Marie...

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 12:32:00 PM

    You have me smiling with your last line. Such a fitting view of the hummingbird. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Have a nice day! Karen

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 12:22:00 PM

    mmhmm feed it, nice one

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 11:40:00 AM

    Yes...a mission to survive.....and your poetry also feeds my soul :)