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  1. Date: 4/26/2010 6:10:00 PM
    Yes I like this. Some people do have walls around them. coming from the big happy family that I came from, they would have been knocked down before I could build them so never did. This poem of mine "Deep Pockets" was written about my son who grew up to be the same generous man that he was as a child. I lost him a few years ago but I have these precious memories. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 11:10:00 PM
    Very nice,Destiny. I enjoyed the journey with this one, from being walled in to finally looking around to see the world. I disagree with christopher below me here. I would not say 99 percent feel this way. I sure don't. But I know some do! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 8:36:00 PM
    You know what? Irma in her comment below just made the coolest statement by saying, 'the only one I was keeping out was myself.' Destiny, I think this write is probably relatable to 99% of the people on this site in some form or another, and that is what makes it so touching. Enjoyed reading. Chris.

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 8:24:00 PM
    Very amusing I like the way U built the wall and than realize things are still the same when they are up or down, I had a wall my self till I realize the only one I was keeping out is myself,enjoyed,,Irma