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Laura Mckenzie
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Radiate beginnings
Whispering morning Gives birth to a sultry sun A warming haze grows
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Autumn Ehrhardt
Date: 12/28/2011 11:22:00 AM
I like how the sounds of whisper softens to image of the sultry sun.
kash poet
Date: 9/17/2011 2:12:00 PM
You are a wonderful poet.I have discovered your poetry only few days back after joining soup in last Nov.
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/11/2010 10:08:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Laura. How are you? Love, Dane
James Fraser
Date: 6/5/2010 3:56:00 AM
What a morning your words picture Laura. I would love to awake to the images you write about. Have a lovely weekend >> James
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 6/4/2010 7:21:00 PM
Delightful Haiku Laura... Soup Mail.. luv..
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/12/2010 9:40:00 AM
well done on the Haiku, nicely done,..p.d
Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/12/2010 6:55:00 AM
Very descriptive Haiku of the days lately..Sara
Jimmy Anderson
Date: 5/3/2010 6:19:00 PM
Hey Laura, Very nice, Haiku.....Jimmy
Kim Hilliker
Date: 5/1/2010 4:14:00 PM
A elcoming Haiku. Great job!
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/28/2010 8:59:00 PM
this is beautiful. HOw did I ever miss it!! Luv , andrea
john freeman
Date: 4/28/2010 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Laura. Thanks for your comment, but it didn't place. Agape, Moses
Jimmy Anderson
Date: 4/27/2010 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Thx for your comments on my write...means a lot!...hugs, Jimmy
john freeman
Date: 4/26/2010 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on lucky 13 Laura, we need to see if we can't start skipping this one, Hu? And go on to # 14. Lol. Agape, Moses
Andrew Crisci
Date: 4/26/2010 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your amazing win, Laura. Your words, so eloquently expressed, add mystery and suspense to the haiku. I love your words choice and imagery. Enjoy your victory and smile! Thanks for your kind comments, Laura. Have a wonderful day. Love and admiration, Andrew.
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 4/26/2010 5:50:00 AM
Congrats Laura on your winning poem in Raul's contest with this wonderful write describing the photo so perfectly.. enjoy your special victory my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie
Katherine Stella
Date: 4/26/2010 4:54:00 AM
oh I like this one Laura congrats in placing in contest mine brought up the rear lol loved the imagery too thanks for sharing and for your kind comments to my work keep up the great writing
Raul Moreno
Date: 4/26/2010 3:46:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your success in my Nature's Breath contest...Raul
cecil hickman
Date: 4/25/2010 11:30:00 PM
a delightful Haiku and such wonderful visions you have depicted for sure,,I wish you the best in the contest,,and I want to Thank you for all your visits to my words and for leaving yours behind as well,,,Blessings..Cecil
Abe Lopez
Date: 4/25/2010 7:24:00 PM
nice take on this photo Laura, I can feel the warmth in your writing. good luck in the contest!
Chris D. Aechtner
Date: 4/25/2010 6:39:00 PM
Laura, I just saw your kind comments. This is a great Haiku you have here....really like how the 'whispering morning gives birth to a sultry sun.' Good luck with this fine poem. Chris.
Jeralynn Clark
Date: 4/25/2010 6:23:00 PM
Nice Haiku Laura, I think we all hear whispes! Thanks for the comments! Best in contest!!! Love Jeralynn
SKAT Aces-
Date: 4/25/2010 6:12:00 PM
Enjoyed this fresh haiku,,Irma