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i NeEd SpAcE!

I need space
Space to let my ideas run freeely 
Forbidden am i to let my feet slide amongst the wet gravel
Forbidden to let the rain run gently through the cracks of my fingers
..How id love to watch the autumn leaves fall upon the dew stained grass
I need space
Space to live..space to love
..love you

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  1. Date: 4/25/2010 11:43:00 AM

    Power to You!!!! Live not to waste a moment. Thx,Jan.

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 11:31:00 AM

    excellent,what a wonderful write,..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 10:51:00 AM

    Great write with a little romance thrown into the mix...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara