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Don't Leave me Hanging sis

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Don't Leave me Hanging sis

 Don't leave me hanging sis !


I came out of no where with an agenda on the mind.
Joining the soup to be near my favorite one
knowing she is not hard to find
a game I did not plan to play
Until he called upon the first round.
giving it my best shot
than came round three and more. 
The poets here I started to explore
Not taking my poetry seriously
The writing just happen naturally
now I see why she visits everyone at the soup.
My sister who puts on a show with words
Is adored by her very own group
the Destroyer was my pet name 
She gave me when I was young
So envious of her, I broke the head of her only dolls.
using her poetry was the way she tortured me 
sitting me down while she read me her stuff.
Inside me she bestowed a poet of mischief
Now I like to tease everyones mind with words


I hate this poem..... Lol..don't read it... It was a joke way back than


(((for contest**Leave me hanging)))

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  1. Date: 3/11/2012 4:42:00 PM

    congrats PD my BFF on featured poem this week on PS.. an awesome one to share with luv.. bff for life..

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 2:13:00 PM

    Congrats on being featured with this very unique write dear pd:) Hope she wont leave me hangin`either,lol..Love always..Arild

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 12:49:00 PM

    Letting in us in with a snippet of your life..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on our work being featured this week...Sara

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 12:24:00 PM

    heyyy PD this aint bad...there's always something different in your poems...now i can't really explain what it is but it's all good trust me...:). So, congrats on being featured this week...Enjoy!!!

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 2:23:00 PM

    I love this poem...read it everyone...and I aint jokin. Congrats on the selection PD. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 7:14:00 PM

    Congrats on the feature this week on Po

  1. Date: 3/5/2012 4:42:00 AM

    i love this poem, from the readers perspective that is. what ever you write p.d gives us all a lift here on soup. harry

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 9:13:00 PM

    Don't leave me hanging!!

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 12:16:00 PM

    Mission accomplish Sir! Now tell me who she is lol jk, I enjoyed this one too ~ WN

  1. Date: 5/25/2010 2:42:00 PM

    wonderful reading this!

  1. Date: 5/7/2010 7:17:00 AM

    that was totally rad dude to so free flo and soft spoken

  1. Date: 5/7/2010 12:35:00 AM

    I like it

  1. Date: 4/30/2010 11:17:00 PM

    this is so natural....you are indeed into writing...enjoyed this a lot....^_^ v

  1. Date: 4/29/2010 5:35:00 AM

    aaack! who is it?? aren't there any other clues? You sure left me hanging with this PD ;) I hope you and your sister will be reunited soon :) will be keeping my fingers crossed for that! Best of luck in the contest, I'm sure this is in the winner's list :)

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 8:54:00 PM

    Dear poet destroyer, I'm torn between Your Poetry as I grew up in foster homes with no real family (Father, Mother, Sisters, Brothers) I think if I had a sister such as Yours I would cherish her and not tease her mischiefiously than again maybe she would be a B h this is a Winning POEM in the " Leave me Hanging Contest and I Congratulate YOU now ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 2:14:00 PM

    good one... sounds lie someone who never took poetry seriously but you got so much love for not taking it seriously and came out of the game with like three hot poems! congrtas on all your success, I love everything I read from you because you put some humor on complicated things. Enjoy your day or night:)

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 11:11:00 AM

    (: i like this. nice job.

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 9:29:00 AM

    I do not get it,(Baby boy)

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 8:46:00 AM

    Hey p.d. Thx for your comment left on my writes! Truly appreciated...later, Jimmy

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 9:07:00 PM

    soupmail!

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 6:00:00 PM

    Thankxxx for your critique' dear P.D. BBF and for the extra added info too.. I owe u one...luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 10:34:00 AM

    This did........indeed.......really leave me hanging! ....If this is true....I hope you find her and reunite in friendship. I had a big brother, who thought I was a "destroyer" also...but that's what little siblings usually do!! Great poem, and leaves me wondering!! :) Good luck!

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 8:51:00 AM

    Dear PD. My poem for a Jewish Mother was meant for all mothers who were murderes during the Holocaust. My mother died - too early - from cancer. I wrote this poem long time ago. Have a nice week and thanks for your comment.... I myself have Jewish and Slavonic (Christian) roots as parts of my family come from the Spreewald (Lower Lustitia) area and were Sorbs, a West-Slavonic tribe. Gert

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 7:25:00 AM

    Like your style. Refreshing, natural. Fun read. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 3:16:00 AM

    Congrats on you feature this week, great write abnd so much told in this-awesome write! And thanks for commenting "Late Spring Explosion" which I wrote late at night...Have a great week ahead, my friend....Gert

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 9:58:00 PM

    a very intriguing write that for sure left it Hanging,,left everyone preety much,,so way to go for this fabulous writeand i hope your sister forgives you,,,I never had any sisters,,only brothers,,and they have left me,,Now,,anyway,,thank you for all the reading of my words and for taking the time to leave your words upon them,,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 8:54:00 PM

    love this! PD! jimbo

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 8:34:00 PM

    Amazing and wonderful. You are really a creative Poet and are keeping a lot many on hanging in this beautiful write. Good luck for the contest. Many thanks for your beautiful and precious comments on Vasava 04. I plan to publish this book based on my father's main theme in near future. Sorry I am not in Kanpur and am not posting any poem. Working through Mobile link with diffuculty. Love and best wishes.. Ravindra ..Poet Creative

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 8:27:00 PM

    PSHHH, ALL MY FAM LEFT ME HANGIN' A LONG TIME AGO.IT WAZ MY FAULT.HOPE UR SISTER FORGIVE YOU. .bUfFy.

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 4:57:00 PM

    enjoyed--you really left me hanging.

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