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Happy Snail Trails

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Happy Snail Trails

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                                                  lowly beachcomber

                                           probing for minuscule snacks

                                                   plentiful low tide

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  1. Date: 4/25/2010 7:41:00 AM

    Love the haiku as well as the title, Mitch! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 8:53:00 PM

    Hey, I see I am not the only one who was wondering what the heck that thing was. I too ended up calling it a beachcomber!! however I gave a title that may have shot myself in the foot! I like yours. congrats.Andrea

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 6:50:00 PM

    Neat way to percieve the photo with your successful Haiku! @ your comment about snail vs crab....I was really stumped myself, but used the hermit crab as an allegory for my write. You did the right thing by not going either way with a specific label haha! The 'beachcomber' was a good way to do it. Chris.

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 1:40:00 PM

    Congrats Mitch on your winning poem in the Journey contest... perfect words to feature the photo..luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 1:38:00 PM

    Hey Mitch, my congratulations on this fantastic Haiku!! Enjoy your win! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 4:30:00 AM

    yes goes real good with the picture..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 3:31:00 AM

    Great interpertation of the picture...Should do well in the contest..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara