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..:A Forgotten Fragment Enigma:..~The Second Half of it~

By the Fall of each Day. .
She Found Her Heart 
Only Wishing to be One with Her 
Childhood Friend.
In the Great Outdoors, 
They Lay on the Velvet Ground,
By the Small Lake that 
Gleams of a Fiery Red with the
Flourished Shades of Their Breathtaking Sunset.
He Created Words in Stone with Clay 
He put Together Himself.
It Held the Shape of a Heart with Fragments of a 
Flame Ignited & Engraved Within,
And Beneath it, 
Read a Poem with few Words, but an Endless Emotion.
It Spoke of the Longing, Burning Desire He Portrayed. .
And the Candle of Light that She Lit in His Chest as
A Fragment of Hope. .
For no Darkness Surrounding the 
Statue of Their Symbol,
The Light would Surpass any Obstacle of Trials.
She set aside His Gift to Her of Words in Stone,
Gently Caressing the side of His Face with the
Soft Tips of Her Fingernails. . .
This Fragment of Desire & this Fragment of Hope
Was to be Summoned in the Midst of their Trial. .
Due in Near Time. .

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  1. Date: 4/29/2010 10:30:00 PM

    Wow...

  1. Date: 4/29/2010 10:01:00 PM

    IS THERE MORE TO THIS LIL' **ENIGMA OF URS? U SURE DO HAVE A STRANGE KIND OF FEEL IN UR POETRY, LIK I CAN SEE WHER IT IS LIK IM THERE ESPECALLY UR ENIGMAZ, HOW R U ABLE TO DO THAT? THATS STRANGE.*.* . .bUfFy

  1. Date: 4/29/2010 1:01:00 PM

    very nice write loved it and thanks for your kind comments faleshia

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 6:34:00 PM

    checking to see if you had anything new, post girl post. you are an awesome writer,,,enigma ...that is my favorite word,..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 11:07:00 AM

    Beautiful heart felt emotion you reveal in this narrative Lynette of becoming one with nature. Thanks for your graceful comments on my poetry. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/25/2010 11:01:00 PM

    Lynette, thanks for commenting to my two poems today. Yeah, lotsa Mormons here in UTah. I'm one of them, but not the best example of one. haha. LUv ya, andrea

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 6:39:00 PM

    Lynette I liked this part two much more because it is very cohesive and it sticks to one topic, you and the boy growing closer in nature. Very lovely! also the way you ended it, it could almost be in the "keep me hanging" contest! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 9:08:00 PM

    A fine poem on love. I enjoyed it

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 6:18:00 PM

    Always enjoying you writes a very intresting input in love, sorry I am reading your two posting backwards..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 6:07:00 PM

    enjoyed

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 5:36:00 PM

    Interesting love write..Keep the creative pen flowiing.Sara

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 5:31:00 PM

    The world is full of a mystery hidden in all kinds of love , your story is told very good, you are brilliant on the emotions of any story,enjoyed,,Irma