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Cinderblock walls
Thick wood doors
And concrete floors
(For)
eight straight hours
switching rooms
switching desks
(Even though)
It's all the same 
Atmosphere
(Semi)
Good teachers
Some funny
Some not
(Confusing)
Assignments
Pile up in my
Brain
(Till)
Relief comes
When the bell
Signals fourth
(I)
Rush to the room
Also my home
(The)
Bandroom

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  1. Date: 11/28/2010 11:00:00 PM

    you can make such art with such simple things, & that is a very rare gift. the parentheses seem to give it more body, & it's geniune, honest. i enjoyed it as well =]

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 9:58:00 AM

    Enjoyed, have a good one..p.d.