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FREEDOM

Only one way out
Crawling through a tiny space 
Freedom here at last




FOR GUIDING LIGHT CONTEST

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  1. Date: 4/23/2010 2:43:00 AM

    Good luck for the contest and a very good write to uplift me on my birthday! Thank you for your kind comments...Gert

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 11:59:00 PM

    A nice interpretation

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 1:15:00 PM

    Good write for interpreting it as freedom, Faleshia! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 10:37:00 AM

    Really neat interpretation on Raul's photo-image! Good luck in the contest. I just read a recent Senryu of yours, and you express such sadness in it....this Haiku is way more uplifting(not that sadness isn't needed at times; just saying). Chris.