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Her Awakening

His manly charms filled her senses as her body yielded with each sensual caress
Hungry for each passionate kiss, she so longed for this, her dreams true

Seeking to taste the saltiness of hot desire as she rode on waves of flooded emotion
She who was lost now reclaims the depths of ecstasy, at what cost, for they redeem true

The rhythm of their tide grows faster, her arms held high, her hair freely flowing
In the breeze of their carnal moans, it’s him, she now owns, and screams true

The guidance of hips, into the union of a wet mist, finding insurmountable pleasure
Intensified by truth and discovery, with lustrous moon and stars silvery, all above beams true

Labored breath brings sated lovers to rest on the shores of blissful contentment
Eyes wide shut she knows, her destiny is beyond what he bestows, the future gleams true


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  1. Date: 6/10/2010 5:05:00 PM

    manificent majestic...we are in a loving mood! Try Love Laced or Ne'er Gone or Bewitched? all love poems ;)

  1. Date: 4/29/2010 7:23:00 AM

    BRAVO, this was a very sensual write and one that captured the readers eyes and would not let them go until the last line was read. The title was excellent for this poem, wonderful work!!!

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 3:32:00 PM

    This is the kind of poetry that stirs the Soup far better than a spoon made out of the tallest Giant Redwood. Its sexy, in desire mode, sensuous, loving, passionate > and above all 100% polite, tasteful and natural >> James

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 11:56:00 AM

    Passionate...nice. I'm liking your work. Tony

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 4:16:00 AM

    Very senual write...Keep the pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

  1. Date: 4/23/2010 4:18:00 AM

    Nicely written Prose, Allie, thank you for sharing it on soup! And thank you for your kind comment on Evening Symphony...Have a nice weekend...Gert

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 6:58:00 PM

    Lots of passion, A good write Allie...Margaret

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 9:51:00 AM

    very nice write enjoyed it faleshia

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 7:21:00 AM

    Enjoyed, thank you,, Irma