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  1. Date: 4/22/2010 10:39:00 AM
    very nice write enjoyed it and rhankjs for your kind comments and support faleshia

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 9:37:00 AM
    I really liked the content of the verse my friend..yet ..heads up! you do not have the form correct..if you like I can help my competition in soup mail...LOL Thanks for all your kind comments!Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 9:25:00 AM
    Terrific ending line! Very nice job, Dr. Mehta. Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 8:37:00 AM
    Intense write Dr. Ram and good luck in Jared's contest... not an easy form to master but u have done it perfectly..luv.... "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 8:30:00 AM
    This is a terrific ghazal, Dr. Ram. Just wanted you to know we have received the last entry for the Spirits of Light contest. I am not looking at names, but I suppose it is yours. Thanks for the blog comment. You came in under the contest deadline, so it was no trouble at all. Good luck in the ghazal contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 8:18:00 AM
    Nicely written Ram...Enjoyed the read...God Bless...Taz

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 7:50:00 AM
    Such profound beginnings to this delightful poem, and ended with a smile!! Loved this!! Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 7:30:00 AM
    Thanks God for all the moments in our life. We need them good or bad. Love the read.,,IRMA

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 6:20:00 AM
    If I didn't read this my understanding of ghazal would have remained intact lol...but this is great ...loved thanks to you for your kind comments today...Allie

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 3:16:00 AM
    Well put together, nice comparison to the unfinish acts of life. Or other things. ..p.d.