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"Eventually"

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"Eventually"

Eventually someday, there will come a time
this heart of mine will finally stop hurting.
If a miracle somehow made you be mine
or if it should finally cease from its beating.
Feeling like I have been on this constant whine
of wanting an unattainable something.
But it is not by choice or my own freewill
as the days, they vanish but my heart standstill.

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  1. Date: 5/16/2010 3:17:00 PM
    Very wonderful write, Well penned. It is good to keep hope. By being positive, life does one day turn around like a miracle. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 4/30/2010 5:26:00 PM
    I know the feeling!

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 4:48:00 PM
    I love this. It is quite awesome. Excellent write da bomb!

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 8:35:00 PM
    I enjoyed the poem in ottava rima.

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 6:33:00 PM
    What a poem a flow from start to end nice one,P.D.