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why cant i stop?

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why cant i stop?

why cant i stop?
the scars on my arms 
they wont go away
why cant i stop?
i might aswell
be killing myself
why cant i stop?
my body cant take it
not anymore
why cant i stop?
it stings
but it feels good
why cant i stop?
the blood is flowing
the cut is growing
why cant i stop?
my heart is breaking
my hands are shakeing
why cant i stop?
please help me stop
my refuge has died
why cant i stop?
i have died inside 
my mind is numb
why cant i stop?

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  1. Date: 4/18/2010 12:27:00 AM
    WELL EXPRESSED, ENJOYED

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 8:48:00 PM
    Fine expressions

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 5:31:00 PM
    very troubling write, hope you can stop, or help the one who does this. Welcome to poetry soup.