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  1. Date: 5/15/2010 8:44:00 AM
    enjoyed the way you ended your poetry, s.m., on comment,..p..d

  1. Date: 5/12/2010 6:22:00 AM
    It sounds like you met someone who was more than a soul mate, but one who actually shared your soul. Perhaps the intertwining of a soul's light and dark sides? Beautifully written, Lynette, and quite thought provoking! I love the setting of nightfall after the festival ends. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/29/2010 10:04:00 PM

  1. Date: 4/29/2010 8:55:00 PM
    well Lynette, you did such a good job writing. you got skills i can see the love you base in here. a dreamy man . yours and only yours . how do you do it to take yourself deep into your writes. and be there. to start off it is an ancient time. Bravo to you my friend,..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 1:10:00 PM
    Interesting story that you have told in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 3:11:00 AM
    LYnette, this is one of your BEST. It really got going when they were under the tree. You showed really great eroticism there. Nice and subtle, not overpowering, but sexual. I really liked it, especially the second half. Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 5:27:00 PM
    differently penned, very romantic and like a novel!!

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 7:31:00 AM
    From where do you pull your ideas? I have read your poems as you post them, and a bunch of them I do not understand; and not from any of your faults, but, because I am too dense ; D. Chris

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 6:33:00 AM
    This was a beautiful write:)