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You cloud my mind with barely a word,
And every thought I have turns into a thought about you
You read my soul like a book with just a single glance,
And every word, you smiled when you realized, was about you.
You unraveled my secrets with just a smile,
And everything I didn't tell you, you somehow just knew.
You stole my heart with a simple touch,
And with every beat of that heart our love grew
You became my world with a gentle kiss,
And every day you hold me close the real world doesn't exist.

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  1. Date: 4/30/2010 7:59:00 PM
    Aww, this is awesome. I hope you're able to write for someone who appreciates this. Good job. Tony

  1. Date: 4/26/2010 3:56:00 PM
    Thank you for your commit on my poem. I'm new here and wrote my poems over a lifetime trying to get my book published to no avail. I love your poem,which shows true feelings. I also posted a poem"Obscured Mystery" if you would like to read it.

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 8:25:00 PM
    Very nice love poem, Destiny...I like the way you start and alternate each line with the same two words...very effective!...Also, many thanks on your recent comment on my poem - Tim

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 12:27:00 PM
    So lovely Destiny and amazing words going to my favorites right now as I will relate back to them with my soul-mate, Ron.. luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 6:58:00 AM
    Loved this, Destiny. Very well written. :)

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 4:19:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry today Destiny. I hope you are having a wonderful inspiration filled weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 11:30:00 AM
    This is exquisite! I was lured to your poem by an insightful comment you left on my sister's poem. In my mind, there's no greater fulfillment, joy, sense of good health and security than receiving unconditional love & adoration (in spite of one's faults) from someone who knows everyhing about you. There's no better place to be than wrapped in his arms.

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 9:34:00 PM
    A fine romantic poem.

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 5:08:00 PM
    a nice write Destiny. . .P.D.

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 4:12:00 PM
    Awesome Poem........Larry