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Morning Rays

Light beams wake me, they
break through the adverse leaves and
shine like their mother









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This is for Raul's "Shards of Light" contest.

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  1. Date: 4/16/2010 12:49:00 PM

    a lovely thought! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 7:58:00 PM

    Very different and creative. Good work. BG

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 3:30:00 PM

    Savannah~ what a wonderful Haiku I hope you do well in the contest! Laura :0)

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 2:45:00 PM

    This is definitely a winner, Savannah. A delightful read...I do wish you good luck in Raul's contest, though I don't think you need it at all...Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 2:06:00 PM

    A bright one . Nice !

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 1:57:00 PM

    Great write that should be in the winner's circle..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 1:55:00 PM

    Love this entry to the contest...so unique, and lovely!! Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 1:08:00 PM

    very nice and good luck in the contest faleshia

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 1:04:00 PM

    enjoyed, money, money!