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Our Basic Space

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Our Basic Space

Lets make this last the whole night
We cant rush this because of its beauty
Lets make it last until the morning light
To satisfy you is my current duty

So would you mind coming up to my place
Maybe having a drink or some coffee
I know that we are working at the right pace
Together we can be set so so free

Your basic space will be crushed by what i do
And dont worry because no one can see here
Ill draw the blinds turn off the lights just for you
Its in my arms that you have nothing to fear

But please dont go away in the middle of it
I can provide whatever it is that you need
If you want we can keep this thing secret
Just know that its on our love that i feed

I get the feeling that theres something you just know
It has to be about the way you can you look at me
And when we are finally done your face seems to glow
Ive realized that its only with you that i want to be

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  1. Date: 4/9/2010 1:20:00 PM
    it's so nice to find the right person! Light & Love