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the beautiful star in my night.(1)

I saw d stars and moon
bow before your feet
Istooped and wonder 
right then my heart
begins to wonder
and then i maevel at your beauty
and the spectacular 
feature of your gaity
Your blue eyes
made me think i was in heaven
but when i saw the moon and stars above me 
then i knew i was right in my paven
your grandeur was glorious
my behaivour was unsteady
and right in your heart 
i knew you thought i was 'notorious'
you lookedgorgious in 
your beautiful attire
Iknew not what to say
and i couldn't retire
you walked close 
to me and for my name
Iwas suprised because you 
cared less about fame
I mumbled out Ga-bri-el
and you said yours was Mabel

                                                                        .....watch out for the concluding part.

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  1. Date: 4/13/2010 4:34:00 AM

    Interesting story with romance that drew me in and am looking forward to the conclusion..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 4:13:00 AM

    interesting poem--enjoyed