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Destination

Piloted masses 
Invasive sharks in the sky
Cloaked ebony 





Inspired by Raul's Mareno's "Tattered wings contest"!

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    James Fraser
    Date: 4/10/2010 1:07:00 PM
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    Laura, i love the third line cloaked ebony >> James
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    Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 4/9/2010 5:58:00 PM
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    Gosh I wish I could have seen that photo. You wrote such a lovely haiku from it. I have not been online for the past 7-8 weeks so I missed it. Blessings, Connie
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    John Heck
    Date: 4/9/2010 11:54:00 AM
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    Excellent haiku, Laura! Every line is both haunting and stunning! Especially..."invasive sharks in the sky"...quite chilling and innovative! Wishing you an abundance of success with your upcoming poetry book. Peace and hugs from your BKLYN buddy, Johnny
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 4/8/2010 9:14:00 PM
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    Fine images
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 4/8/2010 7:58:00 PM
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    Terrific Laura and good luck in Raul's contest... a great description of this awesome photo... an awesome write..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 4/8/2010 4:54:00 PM
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    I like this unusual take on the contest, Laura!! Well done!!
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 4/8/2010 3:52:00 PM
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    great job!! good luck in the contest.
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    Annalise Brigham
    Date: 4/8/2010 3:45:00 PM
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    Good luck in the contest with this this great Haiku, Laura....Thank you, Laura...Peace, Audrey
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 4/8/2010 3:02:00 PM
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    good one!
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    Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/8/2010 2:51:00 PM
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    great Haiku original..indeed..Charma