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Destination

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Below is the poem entitled Destination which was written by poet Laura Mckenzie. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Destination

Piloted masses 
Invasive sharks in the sky
Cloaked ebony 





Inspired by Raul's Mareno's "Tattered wings contest"!

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  1. Date: 4/10/2010 1:07:00 PM
    Laura, i love the third line cloaked ebony >> James

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 5:58:00 PM
    Gosh I wish I could have seen that photo. You wrote such a lovely haiku from it. I have not been online for the past 7-8 weeks so I missed it. Blessings, Connie

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 11:54:00 AM
    Excellent haiku, Laura! Every line is both haunting and stunning! Especially..."invasive sharks in the sky"...quite chilling and innovative! Wishing you an abundance of success with your upcoming poetry book. Peace and hugs from your BKLYN buddy, Johnny

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 9:14:00 PM
    Fine images

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 7:58:00 PM
    Terrific Laura and good luck in Raul's contest... a great description of this awesome photo... an awesome write..luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 4:54:00 PM
    I like this unusual take on the contest, Laura!! Well done!!

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 3:52:00 PM
    great job!! good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 3:45:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest with this this great Haiku, Laura....Thank you, Laura...Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 3:02:00 PM
    good one!

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 2:51:00 PM
    great Haiku original..indeed..Charma