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.:Gentle Hues & Lucent Waves Of A Small Girl:.

..                                       There is an Angel Within me;
                                        Her Wings are Flourished with 
                                             Hues of Wise Wonder;
                                                 A Pure Lavender,
                                                  A Gentle White,
                                                  & a Placid Blue,
                                              With many more too. .
                                   Her Wings Resembling the Shape of a
                                                       Butterfly.
                                      Her Tiny Feather of Lavender atop,
                                          Her Form of a Distant Fairy. .
                                         Only of Lucent Light & Waves.
                                                But don't be Fooled,
                                                  She is not a Fairy,
                                               Nor is She a Butterfly. .
                                    This Angel was Born Smaller in Size;
                                                    To Remind me.
                              Though I should not Tell you what She is of. .
                                             For She is a Rare Angel;
                                      With Gentle Hues & Lucent Waves
                                                   Of a Small Girl. .

                                                        ~Lynn

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  1. Date: 6/24/2010 7:28:00 PM

    That was cool, about your age thing,,yeah I know how them soupers are.. they stick to that age thing.. LOL,, i do not care that just makes you smarter,, and up front a bsd ass,,,you may not see it that way,,hey but i remember the first poem I read of yours you took me on a journey... LOL,,than you have me all in to your poetry... WEll you still beat many on here,,lol,,,you are to cool,,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 2:03:00 PM

    I reckon that there is a little angel in all of us, be young, old, little orb ig, good write...thanks on Eye ball...well that is how it is here out West...just tell the tale...Danny

  1. Date: 4/24/2010 1:21:00 PM

    A beautiful write Lynette and so toouching as Angels and butterfly and Fairies and waves are things I luv... nice to see u here on Soup as well as on PP .. I have been off PP for a few days ..personal stuff going on.. but hope to be back in full swing soon.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.

  1. Date: 4/14/2010 1:54:00 PM

    lovely, gentle and strong.

  1. Date: 4/12/2010 4:25:00 PM

    sounds might familiar my dear. *Joseph C

  1. Date: 4/12/2010 1:34:00 PM

    HI, sweetie girl. thanks for reading and commenting to my poem today. Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/11/2010 7:22:00 PM

    Nice work on your thoughts. I taged you. On the " I AM A POET " Tag . I got taged by Frank H. Nows your turn to pass the tag....ROYAL

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 8:40:00 PM

    PRETTY LYNN?. . bUfFy

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 3:45:00 PM

    Hey, sweet girl, thanks for your remarks on my poems today. I appreciate poets like you here! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 4:23:00 AM

    enjoyed again, my son gets mad at me when I sing the iron mom song.... I only have a few years left to annoy...:) He gives me so much inspiration, in the car on the way to school, he is a riot and full of Calebisms.

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 3:47:00 AM

    Very delicate write..I could go several different ways with this one from the child within to the small gentle Holy Spirit...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and reading my work..Sara

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 4:57:00 PM

    a small world . i always make the best of small things.

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 1:28:00 PM

    This was so sweet, dear. had you put it in the contest? I would like to have seen it win something! LUv ya, and thanks for your comments on my recent poems.Andrea

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 8:42:00 AM

    Awesome . I like the way you started your poem. Than you had a small twist at the end .

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 6:19:00 AM

    Lovely images used to describe this little girl, Lynette. A "rare angel" indeed! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/8/2010 4:30:00 AM

    enjoyed very beautiful write