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To The Soup

Finally a place
Amongst the chaos 
Of cyperspace
Where my meager
Scribblings are read
By kind eyes and
Appreciative hearts
No more trepidation
When I click on 
That ominous button
COMMENTS
Because someone has cut
My idea to pieces
Perhaps because I 
Am no good – or – 
Perhaps because I 
Am better than they
Now I can eagerly
Await the positive message
Or well worded 
Criticism and I feel
I am a better artist
Because of this place.
Thank-you, Soup
For giving me a home
For my thoughts, and ideas
And my creative spirit.

Written April 7, 2010

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  1. Date: 6/16/2010 12:41:00 PM

    I liked this..my sentiments also:)

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 1:26:00 PM

    Welcome to the ps site. The encouragement here is overwhelming. Great write, thank you for sharing. Caryl

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 1:16:00 PM

    great tribute to the soup, you have a gem of a poem here. Great poet friends also.

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 11:31:00 AM

    Thanks Faleshia. Right back at you!

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 11:27:00 AM

    you are a great poet and don't let anyone tell you different believe in yourself and keep on writting my dear friend faleshia