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Nesting

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Nesting

The horrid hollowness of the empty nest,
viewed without a redress, empty nest.

Years of doting, uplifting, caring
bring forth a man of kindness, empty nest.

The sun which rose with his laughter
sets with a mother’s loneliness, empty nest.

Let my heart sing with each memory
of cuddled child breathless, empty nest.

Remembering you, longing for your smile,
brings meaning home, fullness to empty nest.

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  1. Date: 10/9/2013 9:36:00 PM
    This is a difficukt form! I went way back to find this beauty...just doing some research for your contest. Most of the poems I found in the best ghazal category do not follow the form.

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 8:38:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win...enjoyed..Marty

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 3:27:00 PM
    Congrats TEACH on your HM in Jared's contest.. amazing and awesome write and honor for u to enjoy... luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 4/11/2010 6:29:00 PM
    You did a great job, I really like many of your lines, just beautiful.. let my heart sing with each memory... , best of luck in the contest.. love constnce

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 8:53:00 AM
    Enjoyed ! thank you.

  1. Date: 4/5/2010 9:17:00 PM
    Beautifully written and expressed, I have not tried this form yet ,,though I plan too,,but I have already seen a winner for sure,,,,Thank you again for your words that you left behind upon mine,,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 4/2/2010 8:00:00 AM
    Ahhhhhhh!!! Wish this were mine!!! (Me thinks I tried tooooo hard ..ha ha!! ) Simply terrific, Debbie!! I tend to over think it!!

  1. Date: 4/2/2010 5:30:00 AM
    good one!! Enjoyed reading today. YOu got it!

  1. Date: 4/2/2010 5:22:00 AM
    Beautiful Deborah, cant improve on that Daniel