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Proposal

.                  "Will you marrY me?",
.                             He askEd with a smile.
.                                        She downed her head and cried.
. Tomorrow she leaves for New York
.                                       TO persue her dream as a dancer.

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  1. Date: 4/20/2010 12:09:00 AM

    I've never read an acrostic in this form before. I usually only see the very first letter in each line spell the word. Good conveyance of emotion.

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 10:50:00 AM

    Excellent

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 10:08:00 AM

    Yes, Doris, it does say Yes/No. I'm a teacher and we are studying acrostics today. I showed several examples then wrote one on the board off the top of my head. I like to model for my students to show them that poetry is so very easy if they will let it be.

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 8:56:00 AM

    cute poem, does the accrostic say yes/no?