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  1. Date: 11/11/2013 5:01:00 PM
    A grand salute to all the fakirs that still exist. GOOD WRITE

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 7:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Circus" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 4:42:00 AM
    Very nice... and congrats... Terry

  1. Date: 5/19/2012 3:52:00 AM
    Susan congrats on your win, a woman of many skills..David

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 10:45:00 AM
    no no not me. john

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 5:06:00 PM
    a unique perspective and write, Susan! great job of it.

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 9:24:00 AM
    This is cutting.

  1. Date: 11/19/2010 7:50:00 AM
    Sounds like you took a trip to India ... land of many pleasant surprises ... love the surprised ending here as well, friend.

  1. Date: 10/26/2010 2:38:00 AM
    Thank you for the comment. I really enjoyed this poem, Im not religious but love the imagery you have here.Beautifull.Ryan

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 10:52:00 AM
    You done it again. Another awesome write. More please

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 5:50:00 AM
    what a pleasant write. thank you, chuck

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 6:24:00 AM
    WOW! Excellent poem! Loved it!

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 8:13:00 AM
    Getting caught up on your poetry. This is very imaginative. LOts of humor or pathos, just as one wishes to read it. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 8:58:00 AM
    I never thought of it this way before but you certainly have shown the masochism of such an occupation, well penned and I love the tightness of the rhyme scheme...in poetry, Dory

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 2:49:00 AM
    Very fitting title indeed, Susan-- enjoyed this one too-- sure made me imagine that magician going through all these painful yet death defying tricks --nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 2:39:00 AM
    It was so easy to read and hard to forget. Indeed magical. Great write.

  1. Date: 9/3/2010 10:49:00 AM
    Interesting thoughts in brevity! Nicely done :) Hugs, Kris

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 11:59:00 AM
    A magical write, and all applauds deserving. Thanks for reading my poems

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 9:58:00 AM
    Good job! Thnx for leaving comments on my writes. ....JA

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 1:55:00 PM
    nice, made me smile i like the way you rhyme

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