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Life Giving Rays

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Life Giving Rays

Waves covering stones.
Evaporation abounds.
Clouds give back their drink.

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  1. Date: 4/1/2010 8:30:00 PM

    Very good Haiku, Marty. Thank you for your comment on my poem. Charles

  1. Date: 3/30/2010 3:16:00 PM

    Just stopping by to wish you a Happy Easter.

  1. Date: 3/30/2010 1:26:00 PM

    nice win Congrats Marty

  1. Date: 3/30/2010 8:03:00 AM

    Congratulations in your success Marty. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 7:22:00 PM

    Congrats - very imaginative piece

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 3:40:00 PM

    congrats on the win!! Good write!

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 5:07:00 AM

    very cyclical...................(excuse bad spelling!)

  1. Date: 3/29/2010 12:03:00 AM

    Congrats on your success with this one Marty.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 10:40:00 PM

    Was this one for the picture too,Marty? It is very nice. Thanks for your comment today. Luv, Andrea ps Karen says congratulations so I know you must have been in the winner's circle too. Congrats!

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 4:47:00 PM

    I like line three. That has some thought behind it. Thank you for your kind words, Marty Owens. I do apprteciate them . Regards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 1:00:00 PM

    Marty, I just wanted to stop by and add congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest to my other comment. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 11:24:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning Haiku, Marty!!! Told you it was really good! Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 9:22:00 AM

    This is so beautiful and visual. Best of luck in Raul's contest! Thank you for your kind words. Susan

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 8:44:00 AM

    A wonderful Haiku, congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 8:26:00 AM

    Marty, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 6:52:00 AM

    Another big congrats on your winning poem and placement in the Champagne Skies contest... a wonderful and vivid Haiku and a well earned trip to the winners circle..luv.. "Sweetheart" ...right behind u...luv..

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 5:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Marty. Love Carol

  1. Date: 3/28/2010 12:58:00 AM

    Marty, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 3/27/2010 2:40:00 PM

    Hey Marty, Thanks for leaving comments on my poem...I've asked Audrey to post this comment for me....later, Jimmy

  1. Date: 3/27/2010 1:50:00 PM

    An interesting take on that picture, Marty..really good...I thought so hard about mine.. I finally wrote what I could ..I wish you luck in the contest...Peace and love, Audrey

  1. Date: 3/27/2010 7:45:00 AM

    Interesting perspective on the picture. I like the title. Best wishes in the contest. Karen

  1. Date: 3/27/2010 5:50:00 AM

    well put Marty, nice Haiku

  1. Date: 3/27/2010 1:22:00 AM

    Best wishes in the contest Marty.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 10:35:00 PM

    Your's also,Marty, very descriptive of a life giving process. Good luck to you too --Charlie

  1. Date: 3/26/2010 9:36:00 PM

    creative write... enjoyed